Love-Rain Poem by Lakshmi Venkataraman

Love-Rain

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Furious sun at its peek
Hot winds drying its seek

Vegetation agonies to perish
For there’s no water to play n cherish

As all bad times comes to an end
Sheets of black clouds nosed from the sky’s bend

Within minutes to spare
It left no space bare

Peacocks danced in delight
Ducklings quacked in fright

As thunder n’ lightening witnessed
Pouring rains confessed

The climate became excitingly lull
And the streams strayed full

There was no more penury
But it was a state of luxury

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Shekhar Joshi 20 July 2009

very good imagery...........the poem makes me wonder when will it happen in delhi.........lol good one........

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Furious sun at its peek Hot winds drying its seek Vegetation agonies to perish For there’s no water to play n cherish .... love God rain, ..no comparision... just pray for early arrival....10 read mine rain delay....rain has come.... anywhere...butterflies around

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the joy of the rain you have brought out very well...rain would be a permanent topic in poetry

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