Lakshmi Venkataraman


Lady Of My Life - Poem by Lakshmi Venkataraman

Outlining those adorable eyes
Her eyebrows like two streams
Pouring into the seas, meet at her nose bridge
Suspended in the ocean of love, those eyeballs
So pure; So peaceful; So lovely
Captivates mine heart when met.
Her nose gushing like waterfalls branches out
She’s totally an angel beyond description
Perhaps the architect of human herself
The best person of my life –
That’s my Mother
Not a secret left unshared
Not a thought left unargued
Not a day passed without our fights
She always was, is and will be
My great Mother; My fabulous mentor
My exceptional guide, guiding me through my life
After all the disagreement, misunderstandings & fights
We always get to know each other better

Words struggle to come as
They merely can’t describe our relationship
The best one that can happen in one’s life
THEIR MOTHER

I LOVE YOU MOM! !


Comments about Lady Of My Life by Lakshmi Venkataraman

  • Rookie Shalini Sundararamalingam (9/18/2009 9:09:00 AM)

    wonderful tribute to your mother, lovely poem, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/23/2009 8:02:00 AM)

    Outlining those adorable eyes
    Her eyebrows like two streams
    Pouring into the seas, meet at her nose bridge
    Suspended in the ocean of love, those eyeballs
    really wonderful poem with so attached words....10

    read mine mary to marry, anywhere, butterflies around and two eyes... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brittany Jackson (7/19/2009 10:42:00 AM)

    Very sweet poem, kudos!
    & great wording. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shekhar Joshi (7/18/2009 2:30:00 PM)

    excellent poem........wonderfully written.........beautiful tribute to the 'Lady Of our Life'..........

    good work...... ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Vijay Sai R (7/18/2009 12:06:00 PM)

    great tribute to evryone's mother... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (7/18/2009 10:46:00 AM)

    She's the first person you got in touch with.She's everything in this world.Nice writes Lakshmi. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashish Sharda (7/18/2009 1:30:00 AM)

    good 1..
    true lady of our life's (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 446 Points Indira Renganathan (7/17/2009 11:50:00 PM)

    Beyond description a mother....very true 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (7/17/2009 11:48:00 PM)

    A fine tribute to your mother and to all mothers...Thanks for sharing this poem even its not mother's day! ! ! 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (7/17/2009 11:43:00 PM)

    a very sweet one about mom...such fights and arguments has an under current of love which binds...this write should make your mom proud (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 17, 2009



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