Love Should Not Be Poem by Iris Rain

Love Should Not Be



Love shouldn’t be so hard.

Love shouldn’t tear a person up inside.

Love shouldn’t cause so much regret, and “should have been”.

Love shouldn’t make you want to cry out loud in a soundless, unstoppable scream.

Love shouldn’t be cruel, make you want to hurt and destroy the one you love.

Love is the abyss, an unfathomable depth of darkness, and bottomless despair.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Apurva Jain 26 June 2010

love actually should not be like this... love this poem..

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Brenda Arroyo 16 March 2010

This is so true... Love should never be any of these things... And quite in fact, should be the opposite... 'Love is the abyss, an unfathomable depth of darkness, and bottomless despair. ' and even in the darkness of your mood... you put it together wonderfuly. Great job, Iris Rain.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 March 2010

nicely curved, a beautiful portrayal by colors

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Siddharth Singh 15 March 2010

The darker side of love brought forth nicely.

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