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Love Should Not Be

Love shouldn’t be so hard.

Love shouldn’t tear a person up inside.

Love shouldn’t cause so much regret, and “should have been”.

Love shouldn’t make you want to cry out loud in a soundless, unstoppable scream.

Love shouldn’t be cruel, make you want to hurt and destroy the one you love.

Love is the abyss, an unfathomable depth of darkness, and bottomless despair.

Submitted: Sunday, March 14, 2010


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  • Apurva Jain (6/26/2010 6:34:00 AM)

    love actually should not be like this...
    love this poem..

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  • Brenda Arroyo (3/16/2010 1:42:00 PM)

    This is so true...
    Love should never be any of these things...
    And quite in fact, should be the opposite...

    'Love is the abyss, an unfathomable depth of darkness, and bottomless despair. '

    and even in the darkness of your mood... you put it together wonderfuly.
    Great job, Iris Rain.

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (3/15/2010 11:43:00 PM)

    nicely curved, a beautiful portrayal by colors

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  • Siddharth Singh (3/15/2010 2:32:00 AM)

    The darker side of love brought forth nicely.

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (3/14/2010 10:46:00 AM)

    fine piece on [LOVE] finely penned/we need more

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