As we walked hand in hand
Down the beach with our toes in the sand
Under the moon light
Your smile shinned so bright
Yet it still some how turned to tears
And we sat there and you told me your fears
From the day we met
I new id never forget
You’re my best friend
And ill love you till the end
There's an innocence in it that seems to make the world melt away. Good job.
The words you chose for this poem are very accurate :) You express yourself very well
ohhh tyler.. sounds like u truly love someone..lol perfect poem.. well done..
This is a really sweet poem. I like the way you write! You've gotta keep writing cause you sure are good at it! Great work, keep it up Lisa
for being a new writer you are really good. so far i've liked them all keep writing.
so sweet i like how you wrote this... A lot of feelings and hope in this poem KRista
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i could feel you in this words. :) very well written :)