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Said love to me one day,
'Hi, how are you?
But, alas! he spoke sadly
I must move away
I want, but cannot stay'
Said love to me another day
'Hi, hitch a ride, for i swear;
A long, long, time, willingly,
Together can we journey'
Said love to me in his
Charming oh so sweet way
'Excuse me shall we play'
Mmmm, play er sweet love today
Then one day; I said to love
'Oh hush! you galant belamour
You've said your say!
My heart i shall hide away! '
But Love smiled, and spoke
To me in the strangest way,
And with that everspeaking
Voice did say 'I Am Love',
That’s all He said
And pondering in silence;
There, i had my say,
'No! i will no more! hear!
Nor blush! nor sigh!
Be off! you sweet schmoozer! '
So i opened my mouth, wide;
To speak words from
Deep within my heart;
Syllables; No! Nev! Er! More!
And out from my lips,
They rolled, sweetly formed,
From deep, deep, deep, within
My heart; 'My Beloved...'
- 2009
Gillena Cox
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Reason A. Poteet
(2/4/2009 8:43:00 AM) |
With the human personality, yes, relationships can be ever so fragile. Thankfully, God gives us many chances (though we don't deserve the first one) to develop a partnership that is eternal. Well-done story poem, Gillena.
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Yoonoos Peerbocus
(2/4/2009 7:12:00 AM) |
the love story bridges the stanzaic pattern all through via your poetic acumen. lovely
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Trade Martin
(2/4/2009 7:05:00 AM) |
Very charming poem. Thanks....! ! !
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
(2/4/2009 6:53:00 AM) |
You took the words right out of your mouth! NEVER EVER MORE! ! ! But theres always a second chance.Good writes Gillena.Keep it up.
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