Love Traces Poem by Jai K Garg

Love Traces

Rating: 4.5


Domination charged with passion
Words to subdue he strikes deep
Again and again breathlessly vain
Enchanted crazy. she cries for more,

Submission forced by natures call
Captured throb and pulse enslaved
He bursts and the dam overflows
Domination fuses with submission!

Sunday, December 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: human
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 17 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Jai. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2017

A lovely short poem I liked the intensity of expression

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2017

Again and again breathlessly vain! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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