XxAmieLee xX

Rookie (27/10/1991 / Atherton)

Lovesong


Why it is that every time I fall in love,
it always falls apart,
I sometimes think that I got it all wrong,
right back from the start.

Why is it that every time I fall in love,
he always leaves me sad,
he tells me he just wants to be friends,
it makes me feel so bad.

Why is it that every time I fall in love,
although it's all gone wrong,
I always tell myself,
this is like a stupid lovesong.

Submitted: Thursday, February 21, 2008

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Comments about this poem (Lovesong by XxAmieLee xX )

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (5/28/2008 7:40:00 PM)

    This oneis easy to grade because I relate to the feelings but I also
    recognize that this one has a poor ending as well. It wasn't great really at any point but the ending needs work. So, I'll give it a 6. I hope it will get better.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (2/27/2008 2:45:00 AM)

    Sweet girl - anyone who writes poetry like you deserves better. He's there. You just need to be patient and he'll appear out of the ether and kneel at your feet. I like this one. You have a romantic bent which is very attractive. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,078 Points Jerry Hughes (2/21/2008 11:44:00 PM)

    May be you haven't hit the right note yet Amie - look out when you do! (Report) Reply

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