Look What You'Ve Done Poem by XxAmieLee xX
Look What You'Ve Done
Look at me here
Lying on the floor
I'm forever changed
Look what you've done
You loved me and left me
I love you and mourn you
Look what you've done
I said that I loved you
You didn't believe me
Look what you've done
Look at me here
I'm a better person
Look what you've done
I really liked this because you transformed a singular emotion into a transforming experience. That is the residue of cruelty. A magnificent statement done in repetition. wonderful poetic device. I much approve. GW62
Strength, something that poem had a lot of. Great work Amie.
Amy this poem is GREAT. I know that me and my friends don't really talk to you at school much but right now I feel your Pain. So yer Me and Emma like your poems keep at it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 11:01:14 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I have just read this beautiful poem of yours. The poem starts with a feeling of devastation and ends with a feeling of resurrection. So nice!