Loving In Shadows Poem by Rafael Marco Balbin

Loving In Shadows

Rating: 5.0


I love you without a specific reason
This is love; not an infatuation
You make my life meaningful, you're my ambition
In my very speech, you're the intonation

You may not know me, but I'll show you my feeling
I will work hard, your heart is what I'm aiming
I'll pursue my feelings, it is my mission
You swipe away my sadness, you're my ventilation

When I met you, I saw a light
This feeling... I know it's right
Your beautiful face must be on my sight
I'll cherish the feelings and hold you tight

I'll be the cookies and you'll be the cream
This hopeless love, impossible as it may seem
I opened my eyes, then I saw a beam
Good to know that this hopeless love is just a dream

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I write this during our Physics class when I was kinda thinking of someone important. Not all of us may experience true love but we should not give up waiting for the right one. We should not be hopeless about something; not only about love. Because some of the obstacles are just challenges we need to tackle. Like in my poem, even though the lover is experiencing a hopeless love in his dream, he still didn't give up. He woke up and smile because every hopeless part of his life was just a dream. This is the 2nd part of my poem 'Hopeless Love' Itll be better if you have read the 1st part.

'Have hope, Be happy, Repeat'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 18 February 2013

hopeless love - a dream. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Mwansa Mulongoti 18 February 2013

a hopeless love surviving on hope thats less

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