Loving You Poem by Chevelle Reid

Loving You

Rating: 4.5


Living without you is like living without air
Not holding you close makes me feel like a broken glass
Darling if I should choose between you and earth I would certainly pick you
In the mornings you are like a cup of coffee to me that keeps me going
My darling you are like a charming prince coming to rescue a princess from heartbreak
You are like a pot of gold that lighten up my heart

When you hold me in your arms it feels as if heaven and earth are falling a part and we are the only thing remaining from the blast
When you touch me like that it feels as if current as connected to my body
The way my love is strong for you it feels as if it can give electricity to the entire world
I never know that love could make you feel this way until I met you
Damn honey you rock my world

The taste of your lips is like chocolate mix with strawberries that makes a desert to my heart
The presence of you puts a bright light into my world like stars surrounding the universe
When I hold on to you it feels as if I can move any mountain between heaven and earth
When I look at your strong stallion body stand before me makes me very happy to be with you
Darling you are too awesome to be true (Thank God for you)

Been by your side each day and night make a woman heart goes weak
If love is wrong then I don’t want to be right just for your sake
Mi amour (My Love) been with you can makes a girl speak Spanish, French, Italian and Egyptian.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 19 January 2009

oh my goodness what a love intense by desire thunder seems to refrain from the rain by the hue of blue, yet romance parades across the room of moon ness of heart, luscious glow by the passion, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Jay Hmph 21 January 2009

This is a fabulous poem... I feel that nothing could express this any better than you already have

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Lady Simple 12 January 2010

thank you for sharing. this poem is very powerful in many way. i enjoyed the way you wrote about love without saying love is.... you wrote down what you felt and how life would be with him and without you made the poem very clear and understandable

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Eyan Desir 20 April 2009

Nice composition of love 10s

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Malcolm The Last. 14 April 2009

Chevelle, i don't know about love- but your depiction of it is simply perfect.

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Douglas Palmer 08 April 2009

great poem i realy liked it

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Ana Zaldivar 31 January 2009

Chevelle, This is a wonderful poem. Very unique. I like your style. Best Wishes, Ana

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Chevelle Reid

Chevelle Reid

Mount Salem Montego Bay Jamaica
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