No matter how blinding is your ray,
I too shall have my day.
You being reduced to a minnow;
I shall have my moment to show.
You gave me light;
You gave me life;
And you gave me humiliation too.
I have lived all my life, to live that moment true.
When for a few minutes, I shall overshadow;
Over your surface, I shall grow.
A moment of pride and strength;
when the whole universe shall see through;
Me engulfing you.
This is a beautiful one Nikunj! The timing of your poem is also great! 10+ -Raj Nandy
I too, will have my day-Or I also will have my day-reads better than I shall too-I too shall have my day reads good....but because you use the word shall again in the very next line-shall is used too much, too soon. Just an idea or suggestion for you. Good poem, well written. Very powerful too. :) Deborah Cromer
Nice write on the eclipse.... as I think that is what you refer to in this poem...
For some reason I just didnt enjoy this poem as your other poems. Im not quite too sure why i lost my focus but, some of the metaphors were good some others were weak. BUT thats just in a teenagers opinion! !
astronomically true but religious myth do you believe in all this rituals of bath and dip in the holy sea? otherwise good write -10 anjali
Excellent..........inspirational for me........ awesome poem........; -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice description of a lunar esclipse........ taking directly form nature..... you are a 'POET'