~ Magic Carpet Ride ~ Poem by Thad Wilk

~ Magic Carpet Ride ~

Rating: 3.3


Hold me close, take a deep breath and
accompany me. On a journey of love,
meant for your eye's only to see.
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We'll leave this world behind and on a
magic carpet, we shall depart. With you
close beside me, our journey shall start.
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'Twill be so romantic, as we soar yonder
ky. To a place I have picked, for just
you and I.
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There my love, we'll touch heavens gates.
Where the Angels sing, of our love
that awaits.
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I shall hold thee, oh so tenderly. As we lie
on satin clouds of all white. This journey
could last all through the night!
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It could last forever, if you want it to. This
paradise of love is meant for only you.
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I'll love you now and forever, as I do on this
day. My heart it is calling you, please say
that you'll stay...

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~TJW~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duh Huh 28 July 2009

Wow Thad. I cant imagine a woman not staying after such a touching plea. You hit the bullseye on the heartstrings. Thank you for sharing my friend. :) Regards Nora

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Lynda Robson 16 July 2009

You are a true romantic Thad, a magic carpet ride for your love, brilliant, 10 Lynda xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 July 2009

Ride that carpet my cowboy friend, why to go Thad :) Andy 10

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Rani Turton 16 July 2009

Loveky poem, so bright and imaginative!

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