~ Mirror - Reflections ~* Poem by Thad Wilk

~ Mirror - Reflections ~*

Rating: 2.7


Mirror, please grant one wish to me
reflect an image visually, of whom
my true loves, meant to be.
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Mirror, show me in detail, I need to
Know - oh please don't fail.
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I cannot take the pain of never knowing.
The anguish now is overflowing.
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Mirror show me please. I need to see
what my future has in store for me...

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~TJW~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 16 January 2009

People have always wanted the future. Though there are some seers

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C.R. Clark 16 January 2009

Sometimes I think I'd like to see the future, but then, I'm not too sure I could handle it. Nice write, friend Thad. Best wishes. Richard

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Wendy Bureau 27 March 2009

10 for originality..How great it would be... 'Mirror mirror on the wall' If it were only that easy... Well written my new poet friend :) Wendy

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Lynda Robson 26 January 2009

It would help to know your new love's identity I'm sure, great idea Thad, well versed 10 Lynda xx

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Andrew Blakemore 22 January 2009

This is a great poem Thad, I like the angle you have taken in pleading with the mirror to reveal your true love's indentity. A wonderful idea by a wonderful poet, well done. Andrew

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Tsira Goge 19 January 2009

Thad, This style is pleasant to me... All can show mirrors of souls without increase...10....... Best wishes, Tsira

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Ann Beard 17 January 2009

Nice one Thad but dont think I would want to know the future. unless ithe bad bits could be changed. regards Ann

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