You can make a wish on the stars...
you can Wait till the planets aline together....
But what are you succeding at?
Nothing
Making wishes is not going help get you where you need to be...
Praying
Praying and putting faithing in him will help you in what you need
He knows everything
He created this world
He created you and everything that is around you
he would never give you anything he thought you couldnt handle
He is always there with you
You cant see him
But with his flesh he created us
with each part of of his fleash
he used to creat us part of his spirit went with it
He is all you need in life
look to him
thank him for each day he has givin you
for its a blessing
if you realize it or not
Think again before you look to a star
cause they did not breath thier own breath in your breathing body
they didnt give you a chance to change this world
even if its mix of hell its still home
and the lords the creation.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I read a few of your poems and clearly I can see that you got what what it takes to make it through the poetry world: TALENT! As for this poem, it is excellent, well penned and poignant deserving a 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...