Miroslava Odalovic

Rookie - 42 Points (Montenegro)

Make my water dance


Make me your own like breath
Don’t leave me alone in death
The way I am abandoned alive

And even though I know
My last appeal will never be real
I’ll let my water flow
I’ll let my water fall
I’ll let my water feel
I’ll make my water whole

So drink to my dawn
The way I drink to yours
Right at the entrance
Come to all doors
Come to be reborn
And make my water dance

Submitted: Tuesday, October 08, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 08, 2013

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