As I walked along the path
Crushing grass under with wrath
That wanted to whisper sounds
Left unsaid beyond bounds
As I rested under the tree
One blue leaf fell on me
That wanted to conspire with light
Planning future far in sight
As I passed a well-known tree
One blue and blushing smile on me
That brought me back my youth
And sure, well did it soothe
As I passed the mountain still
Stopping wind to play on hill
Flirting flower and dancing deer
Lulling leaves all keep me near
As the brooding breeze did wink
And the fading sun did sink
Bringing me my memory past
Dissolving the moon at last
When I left a lasting sigh
Dancing waves did keep me high
Nature has the most beautiful soothing effect paralleled by no other.Well said in a very soothing manner. Love...TO
well-worked rhyme scheme...aa bb/ cc dd......... i like the enjambment... the poem just flows.. nice write..
How beautifully you put a stop to end your poem with moon dissolving your nature watch at the day's end! Good flow of clear water- like words... ten I give!
Like somewhere I read this excellent work similar to the classic...keep writing good one
I LIKE THIS A LOT...SOLID CRAFTSMANSHIP ALL AROUND....SPECIFIC HIGHLIGHTS INCLUDE: Vivid Imagework...Smooth fluxion...Tight Structure '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
A nice construction of each line in the poem. Well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Admiring nature is a never ending pleasure. I like the rhythms and wordings. Excellent poem. Anjana