Master Plan Poem by Frank Macias

Master Plan



Weary wanderers wanders to the west
Pilgrims punish the puny pest
Seek the snake that slithers slowly
little lice only licks the lonely

Lustful leaders leach and lie
Cool cats are created to cry
If only people could understand
God has no master plan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesse Palma 09 December 2009

nice use of alliteration, although, halana is right, it could be a little longer.

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Halana Williams 09 December 2009

hmmm it was alright... ithink if you would've added more details to make your poem sound whole it would be complete. But if has a nice start =]

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Frank Macias

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