When you laugh,
I do too.
When you smile,
I think of you.
When I blink,
I see your face.
I need help,
I’m lost in space
You dropped me down,
Onto the pile.
With other girls,
All in denial.
You left me there,
I wish you knew.
Just how much,
I think of you
It took this long,
For you to know.
And now you know,
But you still said ‘no’
So I’m here,
Wondering why….
Why did I ever like this guy?
well, this is really good i think your mom or dad is a true poet becoz poetic wrds run in the blood and i know you can be a future smart man congratulation in your poetry dear little sweetheart..
From a critical stanpoint, nice progression and flow. It went from lovestruck to reluctant, to heartbroken very nicely. From a personal stand point I liked it, I connected with it, it was good.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well done, keep writing 10