I had hurt one soul badly
I gave it lot of pain
I also made it to cry
I failed to love it, So
I said heartful sorry to it
It made me to think
What is love all about?
Why I failed in loving it?
Can I love any soul?
And many related things
Soul I had hurt is very close
It knows me very well
Than any other known soul
I failed in loving the close one
Then, how can I love others?
That question opened my eyes
And also made me to love
The very close one in life
From then my life smiled
It gave me lots of happiness
I learned what is love
And also how to love
By loving my close one
That is my own soul
Yes, it's me for me
Bible says to love your brother man. Though it; s very hard when people do you wrong.
That is so true you must love your self befor anyone else can exspet your parents! ! really well put. I really liked it.
very good you are a very good poet you know what is funny about life you say one mean thing to someone and it really puts them down but if you say one little nice things it can really can enlighten some one's day
Well ok, but focus on the imagery to describe what you see. Try reading my 'life and death surround'. Why not read something redeeming? ? ? ? ~beau golden-POET
first you must find your inner soul, then it teaches the heart to hold all the love that you have inside and makes you want to fly, and to let the world know, that you found your inner soul. A GR8 WRITE
This is a cleverly written poem, Kranthi, one which tells quite effectively one of the basic truths of life. If one is not happy with themself, how can they truly love somone else? First, one must accept what they are and be pleased with it, then you will understand how to love another person. Your final verse was very well written. Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well, you sure gave the reader a lot 2 think about here lots of though enter this poem creative poem good story told