Meditation Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni
Meditation
I close my eyes, and
the whisperings of the unknown
take birth in me,
like the spontaneity of a bubble
risen from the depth of ocean.
I lose myself in the ambience,
like granules of sand,
flowing in the wind.
I wander in lost lands
and fathomless voids,
in the nothingness of everything,
an aura, joyless and without pain.
And in the drunken joy,
of the sun that sets,
I feel myself, fulfilled again.
a good meditating poem facing the setting sun...'in the nothing ness of every thing'- a good phrase augmenting the ultimate joyous revelry at the end of wandering...10
I agree with Brie. The last stanza was extraordinary.....very good.........10++++
The last part stuck out in my mind, Very good Thanks for sharing. -Brie
And in the drunken joy, of the sun that sets, I feel myself, fulfilled again. ----- In every poem there is a line or stanza that stands out. This was the one for me.I am in awe of how you describe things, your word usage is best by far.
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nice piece of work..............