Meditation And The Power Of The Mind Poem by Max Reif

Meditation And The Power Of The Mind

Rating: 5.0


Three or four repetitions
of a mental picture
of the location

as I walk toward a building
from a parking lot,
and I'll remember, later,
where I've parked my car.

It's taking considerably
longer to remember
where I've parked
my soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 04 February 2006

Simple but high-impact. Regards, Gina.

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Joy Vanderhelm 04 February 2006

Wow. What a splendid poem, especially on the uptake of the ending. Loved it.

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Carolynn Shaw 04 February 2006

Max, this is stunning! accurately stunning. I too wish I'd written this. Carolynn

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John Kay 04 February 2006

A quick slash and twist and it's over. Very, very good job. Wish I had written it.

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Alice Vedral Rivera 04 February 2006

Profound in its ingenuousness. avr

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***** ********* 04 February 2006

know the feeling too well Max. Great perceptive expression in your poem. Thanks for sharing. 10 from Tai

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