Melting Into The Image Of The Milky Way Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Melting Into The Image Of The Milky Way

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Melting into the image of the Milky Way
You want to cross those rivers of doubt
And surpass the night's magic spell
Matching just like a picture
You need to have a pure time
Let's forget all the past's sadness!
Everything will keep on changing

(dedicated to a great poet, Alurista)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Such lovely imagery here with the Milky May melting and those rivers of doubt. Having a pure time can change the past to live in hope. Beautiful work Ahmad. 10 love Karin

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Kuji Soliman 23 September 2009

nice poem ahmad...really nice

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Abdul Athani 01 October 2009

its a very nice poem change is the need of the hour 10+++

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Juan Carlos Abeti 24 September 2009

hopeful and positive, we all need to hear those words from time to time

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Louis Rams 24 September 2009

'everything will keep on changing'. truth in your words. a ten again

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Sameera Sameer 24 September 2009

thank u for the Invitation my friend

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Omar Ibrahim 24 September 2009

thanks for sharing this beautiful bouquet of scenty words............light poem made me happy.....keep writing..

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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