Memories Poem by Hanley Sarvesh

Memories

Rating: 5.0


there was a time when we are together
those past days are as fresh as a morning dew.
those days are gone now, its no more
feels like you don't even remember it.

when i see your eyes
i can just see how much you hate me
feeling of you hating me
makes me die from inside.

i did mistakes which i regret now
even if i want to come back
you are very far from me, too far
to even turn back towards me.

i ask your forgiveness for not being there
and for things you feel i have done
i wont be able to tell it to you
but i love you very much

its time now to leave behind my past
the time spent with you i would always cherish
you will always have place in my heart
as a beautiful memory

Memories
Tuesday, January 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: missing you
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The one I loved broke up with me and went away from me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2018

when i see your eyes i can just see how much you hate me feeling of you hating me makes me die from inside....fabulous poetic imagination! Loved reading your poem!

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Hanley. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 23 January 2018

writing is a way to say that you love and you care and suffer too is a way of liberating when writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i vote 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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