Treasure Island

Cain Lopeck


Mentally Outdated


Physically elated
Emotionally broken
Mentally outdated
Feelings unspoken
A mind that is clouded
Foggy with thoughts
Words then silently shouted
In her destructive mind while left to rot
Wearing a cloak of invisibility
Being unseen is her strength
One she works against constantly
By pretending at a new length
Shes here though
Having the courage to tell you this
Shes working towards a true glow
And freedom from this abyss

Submitted: Friday, July 12, 2013
Edited: Saturday, July 13, 2013
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