Meri Baaton Mein Kya Rakha Hai Poem by Yasmin Fatima

Meri Baaton Mein Kya Rakha Hai

Rating: 5.0


Mere be-rabt khyalat mein kya rakha hai
Mai to pagal hu meri baat mein kya rakha hai
Baandh rakha hai jane kesi dorr ne maazi se mujhe
Warna behti huyi in lahron mein kya rakha hai
Tu hai jo sath mere
tujhse or kya mangun ai rabb
Jo tu nahi to meri zaat mein kya rakha hai
Koi mujhe samajh na paye to kaise bataon apna haal
Mein to pagal hu
Meri baton mein kya rakha hai

05-06-2013, Delhi

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In summer vacation at home sirf dil or dimag ka futur....dil or dimag ke beech ladayi jiski wajah se kuch alfaazon ne shayerana andaaz me janm liya.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 17 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Yasmin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Vishal Sharma 09 June 2013

ha ha ha great lines indeed do check my poems too mai v shairana mizaz ka hu

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Divya Gupta 06 June 2013

Nice poem..baht acha likha hai..keep it up! : -) do read my poems and comment

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Gajanan Mishra 06 June 2013

Tu hai jo sath mere, I love it. thanks, very good love. I invite you to read my poems and comment please.

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Saadat Tahir 06 June 2013

a nice nazm.... beautiful especially helped by the poet notes...liked i refer you to my comments on Shahzia batools last poem...here on PH the beauty of this poem would be multiplied put in Urdu snytanx stay blessed

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