Mind Poem by Regan Roberts

Mind

Rating: 5.0


My mind is full and my words useless
I can't describe the way things are
Any effort is fairly fruitless
But I do have an empty heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miroslava Odalovic 25 June 2010

The way you aliterate sends you back to your ancestors. I tried it in my mother tongue and it gives an unusual tone to it. MIND is a pearl of thought. I really like it.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 24 June 2010

Empty heart you’ve filled by this poetry both mine and yours …I bet…excellent diction… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 24 June 2010

Empty heart you’ve filled by this poetry both mine and yours …I bet…excellent diction… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Clicked vote box...but? n

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