Mixed Feelings Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

Mixed Feelings

Rating: 5.0


I dont know what to do
I really dont want to hurt you
But i need you in my life
I dont know if its worth the strife

I need to change
i know this
Im trying really hard..
I promise

Maybe in time ill change
and i wont hurt you this way
I love you dearly friend
I promise this wont be our end

12-19-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Knight 21 December 2009

Hi Tiffany - This is an emotional poem that arose from an altercation (V 1) and which you need to resolve and are finding it hard (V 2) . In V 3 you rely on time for you to change and heal the situation. 'Maybe in time I'll change - and I won't hurt you this way - I love you dearly friend - I promise this won't be our end'. Nice poem with some promise of resolution in the final verse. Love you in Poetry - JOHN.

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Eyan Desir 21 December 2009

'Its not nice gettin hurt in love BE sure you dont anyway good write

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Carol Gall 21 December 2009

if its change for the good good write 10

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