Mixed Up Inside Poem by David Gabriel Muñoz

Mixed Up Inside



My thoughts are so mixed up inside,
Trying to write something that rhymes,
Something that will make you feel the way I feel,
So real; so confused; so mixed up inside,

I don’t know what else to write,
Yet these words keep coming to mind,
Just like your smile, or your passion,
Small things that I keep in my mind,
And still I am so mixed up inside.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rudy Hossam 01 February 2009

wow really great i loved it a lot...it really shows how mixed up you are and how u are looking for answers and ways...loved the part were u said 'Something that will make you feel the way I feel' i think through your poem i felt what you feel...thanks a lot for sharing

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success