Mo Chhai Mo Kaa Poem by Bharati Nayak

bahuta bhala heichhi. Mu eha padhi bahuta khusi heli. Dhayabad hee-hee. bri :) ;)

Wonderfully presented the imagery of childhood where a child watches in reflection of mirror about his eating of chalk in school days. Very amazing expression that touches mind and makes reader very emotional. Nice sharing definitely.....10

bahuta bhala heichhi. Mu eha padhi bahuta khusi heli. Dhayabad

Touching drop. Like to read again and again.Loved it.

କେତେ ଦିନୁ ଏ କବିତାଟିକୁ ଆଉଥରେ ପଢିବି ପଢିବି ହେଉଥିଲି । ଆଜି ହିଁ ସୁଯୋଗ ମିଳିଲା । ବାସ୍ତବିକ ଏ କବିତାତି ହୃଦୟସ୍ପର୍ଶୀ ହୋଇଅଛି। କିଛି ଧାଡି ମୁଁ ଏଠାରେ ଉଦ୍ଧୃତ କରୁଛି।....Mana darpanare unkimaare Saana bela khadi khaibara drushya Ketebele ribbon udei Doli jhuluthibara maharga anubhav Frock pindha kishori bayasara Mitha mitha swopna.... dhanyabad. (This is really a marvelous poem that attracts readers to read over and or again. Thanks again.}

-An amazing sketch on reflection of life’s fleeting moments replete with images and vivid inscription of past memories…. Mana darpanare unkimaare /Saana bela khadi khaibara drushya/Ketebele ribbon udei/Doli jhuluthibara maharga anubhav..A very touching poem! Though I don’t have much command on comprehending difficult poems but I understand the expression…Please consider if I am poor in my remark…Regards

Beautiful poem made more and more sticky by the flowery imageries you have used. Will comment on it in Odia after typing them. you know I have a weakness for good poems of my mother tongue. 10++++ for it.

wow¡¡ what a beautiful poem.i enjoy your poem.thanks for shairing...10+++

Thank you Bri Edwards.You really surprise me with your knowledge of Odia.