Moist Rainbow Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Moist Rainbow

Rating: 5.0


She woos and coos with all her secrets
Leaving all in her universe own opened sacred
Through ages and eons slowly descending
Like mist being swaddled across the green.

When she traversed to her edges of age
Like silken spring showering over her glaze
Keeping her promises like saints and seers
Being curious of dives fast in the oceanic vast.

As she pounces the pear and peg of her day
Peeping through her thrumming womb of love
On the bathing platform of her living a day
Lovers and oomph appears impassioned.

When she jitters to be lost beyond her edge
Running all her length half necked, half robed
Her mysteries move like rainbow in the moist sky
Caressing her newly born just crying soiled son.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 06 January 2009

elegant...dignified write as always.... master of amazing and depth words... piece from brilliant and splendid thoughts.....10++++

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Melvina Germain 27 August 2007

A truly wonderful poem Dr. Subhendu Kar, I truly enjoyed the read, Thankyou. --Melvina--

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Lee Degnan 13 July 2007

Sensual poem, potent imagery, masterfully done... this poem has a nice flow also... great job Lee

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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