Mom Poem by goki nair

Mom

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when i opened my eyes,
for the very first time.
I saw a smile through all her pain.
when i cried she held me tight,
the warmth which dwelled made me fine.

when i walked,
for the very first time.
The road ahead made me fall,
But she was there to see me through.
She made me strong with all her strenghts,
so that i will never fell again.

when i dreamed,
for the very first time.
she stood by me all the time.
you go ahead and never turn back,
Everytime she said to me.
I lived my dreamz without fears,
Bcoz i knew she was always there.

when i left,
For the very first time.
She waved me bye with a cheerful smile
But i could see her eyes so numb.
With every step i went ahead,
i could feel her break apart! !

LOVE YOU MOM

Monday, April 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,mom,mother and child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 09 April 2018

when i left, For the very first time. She waved me bye with a cheerful smile But i could see her eyes so numb. departing..... away from dearest mum....... it is really very painful for both mother and child. your poem is full of emotions.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

Child opens first eyes after birth and sees mother. There is strong bond between mother and child. Living without fear is nice. Mother always advises to do good in life. This poem is very lovely and affectionate. An amazing sharing is done. This is an excellent poem...10

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