Monsoon Shower Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Monsoon Shower

Rating: 5.0


The rain has a lot to say
And it speaks its heart out
Leaving nothing to fantasy
Divulging all uncensored
No manipulation, no manoeuvres
Just an outburst of sad storage
Un-simmered serving to the listener
Uncontemplated confession
In the midst of bricks and walls
Of our so-called connection.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 07 July 2023

Truly, showers provide respite from warmth and happiness to each and every one of us just like your poems. Full *****

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Short and impressive. Truly Nosheenic. Five stars and MyFavouritePoems.

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3) A heartful appreciation from the Land on Monsoons.

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 July 2023

Wow! ! This is beautifully written on rain. Loved it.

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Denis Mair 06 July 2023

An end to exile in the thin atmosphere! Such an orgiastic release, such anticipation of mud pies to be made!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 July 2023

The first four lines speak the whole thing that the poetess wants to express through this excellent poem. Excellent

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 08 July 2023

An outburst of sad storage. Good use of rain metaphor. May spring come fast in your Connection

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 July 2023

Bravo my comrade TFS

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 July 2023

A beautiful poem full of metaphors and captivating images. Wonderful poetic expressions! Top Marks

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Aarzoo Mehek 07 July 2023

This poem came across at the right time of the season. So beautifully written

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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