Mood Swings Poem by suzan gumush

Mood Swings

Rating: 5.0


My hormones are playing tennis today
Minute by minute
It changes it's moods
Sometimes those swings they do hit hard
Rushing through my body
Love all....
Then it quickly disperses
Hate all!
Sometimes I don't know
If I'm coming or going
Inside my body
A yoyo they're throwing
Comes a mixture of emotions
Shall I pour in those potions
Let it all simmer down
And get ready for the next round
Comes a calming affect
Relaxing my moods
Only to be overtaken
With thoughts that give me
A humourous smile
Turns into giggles of laughter
That seem to last for ever after
Those hormones do bring
One hell of a confusing swing!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I love it. Some great lines in there - Love all and Hate all are my favourites Esra.

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Stacey Watts 07 August 2008

This is so me right now. I love the way you portrayed mood swings. Thank you for sharing it.

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Cephas Oluwaseyitan 07 November 2006

Good one. It addressed an issue that all can identify with.

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Anna Cellmer 04 November 2006

Well expressed I think we all feel this way some days :) So many emotions during a day so many moods sometimes the only we can say is to smile at the end from our selves, great poem

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Bob Oldfield 28 October 2006

Solid first line! Love the thought it conjures up! Good job with this... Bob

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Brian Dorn 04 October 2006

Suzan, I love the yo-yo reference... playful, yet visually potent. Well done! ! Brian

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