live to die

Rookie (1/24/1992 / Cortez)

Moon - Poem by live to die

I wish I was like
the moon hide during day
then at night no could see
in the dark no one to see my pain
I wish I was like the moon
to disappear on a no moon
then no one would care
if I disappeared like that
I wouldn't reappear
no one who could know me
I hate people that couldn't understand
even if they try the only way
to understand me is to not to know
how could anyone understand
they just asume how I am
always to hide
never to show myself again
because no one should see my pain
so I wish I could be like the moon
to disappear never to show myself again


Comments about Moon by live to die

  • Rookie Arabian Heart (6/23/2008 8:44:00 AM)

    thats true
    the only one who can understand you is you
    but anybody can care and feel love for someone
    as long as your expressing your self
    thats all that matters

    write if it makes you see what you want (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Fallen Too Far (1/9/2008 1:50:00 PM)

    I know. Thank you.

    (fallen) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie .Kathryn Van Atta (12/27/2007 10:21:00 AM)

    Well I would care.
    A full moon lights up the sky at night for people who cant provide their own light.
    I think the moon is beautiful.
    gosh Trevor. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie jazmine kristen (12/23/2007 5:51:00 PM)

    dont worried u r not only i feel like that 2 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fred Babbin (12/16/2007 8:41:00 PM)

    Don't give up kid - keep writing. I've been depressed my whole life until I started writing, and I'm 82, . I hope it doesn't take you that long. And find out what makes a good poem. It ain't luv, that's for sure. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fred Babbin (12/16/2007 8:41:00 PM)

    Don't give up kid - keep writing. I've been depressed my whole life until I started writing, and I'm 82, . I hope it doesn't take you that long. And find out what makes a good poem. It ain't luv, that's for sure. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 16, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 30, 2011


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