Khairul Ahsan

Gold Star - 12,196 Points (Bangladesh)

Moonlight Musings - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

The moon was full and the night was cool,
Windows were kept open, breaking the rule.
They lay in the bed with the curtains pulled aside
So they could see the full moon, smiling outside.

The world has many moon gazers, just as he.
Many of them I'm sure would be pleased to see,
The moon at full bloom, oh what a pleasant sight!
Some will write poems and some will go quiet.

Past midnight when the outside sky was alight,
Poured into their room the soft ambient light.
As traces fell on their faces, she dispensed with her pillow,
To rest on his outstretched arm, her moonlit face aglow.

They had some pillow talks, they had some fun.
And all acts of love were lovingly done.
Like birds they nestled under each others' wings,
And quietly fell asleep, amid their moonlight musings.

15 April 2014
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Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Full moon causes tides in the oceans, as also tides in the poets' hearts! The poem is dedicated to all moon gazers.

Comments about Moonlight Musings by Khairul Ahsan

  • Rookie Debra Robinson (6/14/2014 11:38:00 AM)

    You have a beautiful talent for painting pictures with your words and calling to light special moments or analogies. Lovely...... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/5/2014 1:20:00 AM)

    @ * Sunprincess *
    Thank you very much for loving my poem so much. I am so inspired! Much obliged. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/3/2014 8:29:00 PM)

    @ Beauteous Victory
    Thanks for the warm words, as always! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/3/2014 10:15:00 AM)

    @ Aqua Flower,
    I am greatly moved by your inspiring words. I cannot thank you enough for the way you've appreciated me. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/3/2014 9:28:00 AM)

    @ Hira Ahsan,
    Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your kind words of appreciation here. I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/3/2014 9:12:00 AM)

    @ Neela Nath
    You were the first to appreciate this poem of mine. Thanks for that. I like the profession you mentioned in your profile. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (5/2/2014 1:03:00 AM)

    Like birds we nestled under each others' wings..
    so beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (5/1/2014 2:11:00 AM)

    Like birds we nestled under each others' wings,
    And quietly fell asleep, amid our moonlight musings.

    This sums up the bliss of loving togetherness...! Watching the moonlit sky and lying in each other's warm embrace with no nagging thoughts to pester and slowly gliding into sweet slumber's domain in a mood of peaceful forgetfulness is heavenly.... Enjoyed this beautifully crafted rhyming write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,330 Points * Sunprincess * (4/29/2014 10:26:00 PM)

    ........a beautiful and romantic write....loved reading every line... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (4/29/2014 4:47:00 AM)

    @ Ruma Chaudhuri,
    Thanks for reading my poem and appreciating it.
    Your appreciation means a lot to me. I am truly inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,462 Points Ruma Chaudhuri (4/21/2014 9:21:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. You are really a good nature lover as well as a lover. However, the poem is excellent. Ruma (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 160 Points Hira Ahsan (4/20/2014 1:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful portrayal of the enchanting feel of heart and romance filled moonlight...superb (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (4/20/2014 9:00:00 AM)

    I'm also a moon gazer.Pictorial quality of this fabulous write is superb! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 19, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 21, 2015

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