Morning Poem by Asiki Lucky

Morning

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The moment that unleashes the dawn of a new day,
Where every breathing thing begins to consider it way,
Sometimes she seems short or long,
But her beauty is that she always brings a new song.

Oh morning; the beauteous sister that awakens us from slumber,
Reminding us that the day has given us a new number,
To pray, stand, walk, run and fly,
Fly, fly, and fly beyond the uttermost sky.

Morning comes for every creature,
That all could feel the beauty of nature,
She welcomes you with a splash of cool air,
Then you will remember that life is a little bit fair.

Morning; a friend that fades away for some time,
But alas! Returns within a short time,
A good symbol of true friendship,
Just like the ocean is to a ship.

Though you may not utilize her to your own gain,
She still comes back for you again and again,
A princess that travels from a million mile,
Just to give you a ravishing smile.

Like a fan with three blades,
Chasing each other under the same shade,
Morning, man, and money,
Three of ‘em as sweet as honey.

Man lives today and tomorrow no more,
Money is a cloth you keep wishing you ever wore,
Morning never stays with you all day,
But she is always there for you to see each day.

Oh morning, I know you are somewhere very nigh,
May my morning wishes take me to a place so high,
Morning is a blessing in disguise
Truly, to those who are really wise.

Wednesday, September 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 16 September 2015

'Man lives today and tomorrow no more' a sad reality, in a ode to the 'morning'.. where '' the dawn of a new day '' recalls those 'thousand auroras have yet to shine' in 'Also sprach Zarathustra' (Nietzsche) welcome at P.H. Asiki

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Sofia Kioroglou 16 September 2015

Good poem! Well done!

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 September 2015

Morning brings a new song, reminds us to pray, morning does not stay with you long Morning is a blessing in disguise i like this praise of this morning. studying your poem i have taken these points. and i like it very much. thank you

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Ruma Chaudhuri 17 September 2015

Excellent. Beautifully explained the ' morning '. I love to read it. Thanks for sharing. Ruma

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Della Perry 17 September 2015

i really enjoyed your poem. You are very good xx

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Marieta Maglas 04 November 2015

wonderful poem............................

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C. P. Sharma 17 October 2015

Good and refreshing penning. Keep it up.

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Melvina Germain 06 October 2015

Awww now this is refreshing as it share the beauty and tranquility of morning, that soothing time when you open your eyes and hear nothing but feel carressed by morning song in silence. Fantastic poem Asiki.....

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Patrick Bryan 25 September 2015

Great Poem! I really enjoyed it

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Pratikshya Sedhain 24 September 2015

beautiful use of rhymes....... THanks for sharing Ashiki......

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