Mother Poem by Janaki Nilmini

Mother

Rating: 5.0


Hear! Dawn orchestra
Milk, with unconditional love
Wake up time for school

Material wealth is fun
knowledge cannot be stolen
She was strict and firm

Simple life brings joy
greed and hatred defile mind
Mum was always clean.

Live with compassion
Do not wait till Autumn winds
Life is short and swift

First flight from my nest
Build your own, and make it strong
It's your task, she said

I had my firstborn
You nursed my exhausted self
Lectured on nature

Days became decades
Together we grew older
You were aging faster

Feeble and weary
End of journey, you whispered
Good bye, I love you

In silence you slept
In reverence I watched you
Returned to nature

Friday, October 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Deep and passionate feelings, well articulated and elegantly penned in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Janaki and do remain enriched.

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Janaki 23 June 2018

Thanks Chinedu, I am very touched.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 October 2017

Such a heartwarming poem, Janaki....10+++++

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