Mother Earth Warns Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Mother Earth Warns

Rating: 5.0


I too wish to live— live rather well
As you all that on my bosom dwell,
All patience dies due date,
Let this be told and straight—
I can live without, you can't so tell.

A greed grown fat did gloat on her wail,
Who ever heeds mother's warning bell?
Well before this due date,
They plan to leave planet—
Same way prodigals their parents fail.

Moon has no atmosphere,
And earth has no good peer,
Or they too would one day become hell.
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Happenings | 01.06.16 |

Wednesday, March 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,greed,warning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Tired and sick of greedy exploitations of mankind, Mother Earth gives this warning, a warning in utter frustration and desperation.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 27 March 2019

Moon has no atmosphere, And earth has no good peer.....well perceived sir! An excellent work.............10

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 March 2019

Yes indeed, man would have spoiled them long back. He is still trying. Thank you Dr Swain.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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