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Kaede Rirunaru

(I'm not already dead.. my birth, Desember,15,1990 / Surabaya, Indonesia)

Mother, Unreplaceable Woman

When I was made,
And suddenly born in to this world,
From mother's belly,
And breath my first air, , ,

Grateful that I can saw how beautiful,
My mother face with a glittering tears,
Carried me with happiness,
And that's the first time I feel calm, , ,
Protected and be loved, ,

And finnaly grew older,
Be a nice girl,
Against the world on own,
Cause mother's tolds,
not Fairy tales, but some act, , ,

But it just make me remember,
How old you are,
Look at the way,
And cried with all that misery, , ,

But kept still strong,
Never be wrong,
And try to go on,
Never give it up, , ,

You teach me, sing to me,
Tell me when I was wrong,
Help me to understood,
Always on my side, , ,

This day, I remembering,
Fifty Three Years has passed,
13 November 2008,
I circle it on the date note, , ,

You've been here along that journey,
Across that many barrier and challenge,
Go around the world to see,
For more knowledge and study,

At this 13 November 2008,
The rain falling,
followed by my said,
From the far at upstairs,
'Happy Birthday, My Mother, Hope The God Always Be Yours Side'

(For My Mother Birthday, Thank You For My Mother That
Cried When She Read This Poem... I Love You, Mother...)

00.39,13 November 2008, Indonesia's Time, , ,

Submitted: Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Edited: Thursday, November 13, 2008

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