Kaede Rirunaru

Rookie (I'm not already dead.. my birth, Desember,15,1990 / Surabaya, Indonesia)

Once Again - Poem by Kaede Rirunaru

If the night not came too fast,
And the life can ruled by myself,
I want to feedback,
So I can know more 'bout you,

But what I'm done, loose chance to come closer,
Why I'm not doing right?
I'm hid, , I'm shame, , I cried, ,
I'm just regretted, , ,

If the world was a small city,
And you're not just one,
I can found you everywhere,
And to saw you one more time,

But what I'm hope, It's just a empty space,
Why I'm not asked to you?
'Where you belong in this big town? '
'When we will meet again? '

It's not what I'm dreamin on,
And It can't move like I wish,
So why...

Why I'm blamin on the night? !
How can I don't have that courage? !
That's all my mistake,
Please once again, , ,

If I have just one more day,
And the moon were dance,
Then the light was so glance,
May I meet you again, and smile...



Note: This poem is for 'S****r', I write this down because I know
my friend (except friends in PH) will never read this poem,
so, I made this one..


Comments about Once Again by Kaede Rirunaru

  • Freshman - 813 Points Antonio Liao (12/3/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    this one of the poem that gives me to remember... that life i take will always be...
    a journey to believe..that its not mine alone.... a very beautiful poem.... thank you
    God bless (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (12/3/2008 7:18:00 AM)

    Poem contains a lot of emotions (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (12/3/2008 5:29:00 AM)

    I find this a heart wrenching poem. Good work and great to see you writing again. Love Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (12/2/2008 7:47:00 AM)

    Ammmmmazing waves in this composition...........10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kite Remedy (12/2/2008 6:55:00 AM)

    there you are,
    painting a picture
    of a friendship so far,
    but not lost of its features..
    great works.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Min Sia (12/2/2008 6:03:00 AM)

    It would better if he could read this!

    But great poem..very expressive..unique..exquisite..

    Dearest friend..you're doing great!

    A 10 for you! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 3, 2008


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