john mc cudden


Move On


Since you left me
It’s been raining for so long
Why don’t you tell me?
What did I do wrong?
Since you left I have had to be strong
I hate the rain it’s been going on far too long

No sunshine only rain
No mater what you do
I will be strong again
I just don’t like walking in the rain
Was it something I did wrong
Or are you still playing your mind games?

Now there is sunshine coming through the rain
I will be strong be a man again
I don’t like walking in the rain
So where is the sunshine?
I want to find it again

Walking in the rain I stopped and thought
Be strong get a life again
Love the sunshine hate the rain
Don’t want to go out there again

What will I do now
Just be part of the crowd
No that is not for me
I will be strong you wait and see
a stronger man thats what i will be

Submitted: Saturday, February 07, 2009

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Comments about this poem (Move On by john mc cudden )

  • Rookie - 34 Points Maia Padua (2/13/2009 9:19:00 PM)

    a very inspiring piece....words shared are very touching...
    optimistic towards pain of love......
    i love the lines from the title down to the end
    a great piece for anybody declining to move on... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (2/9/2009 5:06:00 PM)

    Beautiful write with hope running through it John thank you for sharing it...Fi 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jim Norausky (2/9/2009 1:24:00 PM)

    I really like the way you weave sunshine and rain with your broken relationship and apparent hope for reconciliation. Well done. Jim (Report) Reply

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