Treasure Island

Seamus Hogan

(Ireland)

Moving apart


Moving apart
As quietly as a puddle freezes,
Crying as silently as slush.
Ah, how long it seems
Since the first word was a kiss.

Submitted: Sunday, November 06, 2005

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  • Vanessa Brown (11/6/2005 12:05:00 PM)

    oooh, i like this. very strong image...and i kinda know that feeling, where you know you're moving away from someone, and it makes your stomach turn to sludge, but you know there's nothing you can do about it...you've really captured that moment here. nice one! (Report) Reply

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