Mr. Would Be! Poem by Urmi Tanna

Mr. Would Be!

Rating: 4.3


As your finger rolled down my curls,
my world, took a thousand whirls.
I slept on your lap
as you kissed my cheek.
You played the role that no one did.
Reel it was because you faded away
Soon I woke up
with a smile whole day!

Friday, April 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Urmi Tanna 01 May 2017

Thank you all for the appreciations! 😊

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Siddartha Montik 01 May 2017

Good narration of Soothing times.. and full laugh of a day! ! Thank you Poet for sharing! ! 10+

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Khairul Ahsan 27 April 2017

@Urmi Tanna, It's a nice, sweet poem. Well done! 'Soon I woke up with a smile whole day! ' - Wonderful!

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Rajnish Manga 21 April 2017

Sweet and hauntingly romantic. Very well crafted. Thanks, Urmi.

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 April 2017

Nice fingers of sleep. Thanks

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