as i sat and sipped my cup of coffee
i saw an lady sitting and doing the same
grazing out of the window and thinking
about someone or abut no one
about her love or her husband
or just about life or about some wonders
she was intense but buetiful
calm but loud
and i dont know what
as the world went by
no movment came by
it was a wonderful day
but her buety mesmerised me
the day as so went by
her thoughts came returning by
alas i dont know why
but she kept distubing me
as time went on
i could never forget her
as her buety i remembred
but about her sadness i wondered
A melancholy poem. Try to work on your spelling/grammar, I know it's hard!
hey...! ! ..this is gud.....but i think u shud double check ur spellings.....just a simple thing.... :)
a cute image! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
her sorrowing beauty could be the reason for your attraction...impressive write
wonderful one...yes it does happen sometime when u see some unknown one. u do not know abt him/ her... completly a stranger to u.. but still his/ her thoughts keep on disturbing u.. very gud write. above 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a very detailed picture on a lonely and beautifull lady.how nice. posted 10 love surya