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My Angel

My angel is the one who looks over me
My angel is the who cares for me
My angel is the one who loves me
My angel has beautiful brown eyes
My angel has beautiful black hair
My angel will be there when I get hurt
My angel will be the one that is always on my mind
He is the angel that keeps me breathing
He is the angel of my dreams
He is the angel that keeps me alive
My angel will cheer me up when I’m sad
My angel will love me for me
He is my angel of my life

Submitted: Monday, April 14, 2008
Edited: Monday, September 19, 2011


Comments about this poem (My Angel by Jessica Bousfield )

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  • De Dzhambhanz (5/7/2012 10:29:00 PM)

    I like it


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  • Robin Miller (7/24/2009 1:21:00 PM)

    hey i like the poem alot it reminds me of my husben because he is an angel for me so what i am saying is that there is an angel out there for every one

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  • Rita Hawkins (12/24/2008 7:56:00 AM)

    Jessica you will get some insults from some people, and people like titus petronius are people to ignore, but be inspired by people such as Andrew and myself for I try not to insult no one, all I do is say good job and give a comment on the poem, or try to give some suggestions polietly.

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  • Andrew Morris (11/2/2008 7:25:00 AM)

    The name says it all really
    titus petronius is a tit

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  • Titus Petronius (10/22/2008 10:58:00 PM)

    Miss Bousfield:

    I) I regret to inform you that angels do not exist. No one is watching you from the star-dusted sky, no benevolent force exists outside the sphere of human understanding; and to titillate us otherwise is just cruel.

    II) I realize that the angels to which you are no doubt referring are those of the more intangible variety, and are probably metaphors for a vindictive ex-boyfriend or stepfather in whatever bucolic village you come from, but, then again, you don't know what a metaphor is, so there's my theory, debunked.

    III) If you're going to write poetry, read some.

    Love,

    Titus Petronius

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  • Melanie Weeks (9/9/2008 4:55:00 AM)

    utterly beautiful. i loved it.great job

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  • Skylar Smith (8/26/2008 5:40:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Aziz Soubai (8/2/2008 8:32:00 PM)

    Good poem jessica keep writing

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  • jet anderson (7/1/2008 2:59:00 PM)

    I wish I had an angel to say these words to. Very romantic indeed. I'm new to this site and I've got only two poems, read them if you can, enjoy them if they delight.

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  • Marley Morgan (6/11/2008 3:01:00 PM)

    the angel soon will be in the devil hands....hahaha

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