jahanvi .......................


My Childhood


my childhood was the time when i was innocent
when the world seemed to be fair
when my universe was around my toys

my childhood was the time when 9i lived in dreams
when everyone was selfless
when everyone appeared to be a friend

my childhood was the time when my life was full of colours
when sorrows never knocked my door
when smile was gift presented to everyone

my childhood was the time when love was pure
when there were no obligations
when tenderness prevailed

my childhood was the time which is long gone
tears flow from my eyes when i go back in my childhood
my childhood will never come back but
the child in me will never go

Submitted: Wednesday, July 01, 2009

Do you like this poem?
20 person liked.
3 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (My Childhood by jahanvi ....................... )

Enter the verification code :

  • Yogiraj Biplab (3/21/2014 10:20:00 PM)

    Wo! what you said- -the child in me will never go.
    This is what seems to be true to everyone. Good writing. (Report) Reply

  • Yunn Lee (12/11/2013 12:26:00 PM)

    Very good Poem. I like how you said the child in you will never go. I wonder if I could use this poem in school for a homework to say what this poem tells you]]? (Report) Reply

  • Drew Burke (5/17/2012 2:56:00 PM)

    Exactly how I felt, I had to lose my childhood at age eight when my parents were going through divorce, and I was the weirdo or freak to the other kids, but the child in me never left, insults were just another unique complement to me (Report) Reply

  • Shekhar Joshi (7/2/2009 1:41:00 AM)

    nice one.........childhood indeed is such a beautiful stage of life........

    good powm......... ;) (Report) Reply

  • Ted M (7/1/2009 2:13:00 PM)

    Childhood is the best stage of life for any human being. Fun, carefree, innocence, security and protection and lots of love from elders. As you grow up, you miss all those nice things.Well written.
    If I may say so, avoiding repetition of childhood could make your sweet little poem still better. (Report) Reply

  • Nooruddeen Mm (7/1/2009 1:14:00 PM)

    Dear Jahanvi
    Recollecting the vivid childhood is common nature for every one I think but when you think about the later stage we all want to get back the child hood.
    So many poets narrated so many poems very effectively about this subject. You too very effectively expressed it.
    Congratulation.
    Nooruddeen (Report) Reply

Read all 10 comments »

PoemHunter.com Updates

New Poems

  1. I give You the Love of Calla-lily, Harindhar Reddy
  2. Captured In Chambers Of My Heart, Narayana Raghavan
  3. Beauty Revisited, Narayana Raghavan
  4. Santiago, Nathalie Handal
  5. Limerick-36, DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
  6. Nightened Color, RoseAnn V. Shawiak
  7. Hello Man! Dawn Cracks Darkness (Cinquain), Harindhar Reddy
  8. Farewell To Spring, Narayana Raghavan
  9. The Moor, Nathalie Handal
  10. Your Songs Mean Nothing Now, Phil Soar

Poem of the Day

poet Sir John Suckling

Dost see how unregarded now
That piece of beauty passes?
There was a time when I did vow
To that alone;
But mark the fate of faces;
...... Read complete »

 

Modern Poem

poet Elizabeth Bishop

 

Member Poem

Trending Poems

  1. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  2. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  3. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  4. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  5. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  6. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  7. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
  8. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  9. If, Rudyard Kipling
  10. Sonnet I, Sir John Suckling

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]