My Childhood Poem by jahanvi .......................

My Childhood

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my childhood was the time when i was innocent
when the world seemed to be fair
when my universe was around my toys

my childhood was the time when 9i lived in dreams
when everyone was selfless
when everyone appeared to be a friend

my childhood was the time when my life was full of colours
when sorrows never knocked my door
when smile was gift presented to everyone

my childhood was the time when love was pure
when there were no obligations
when tenderness prevailed

my childhood was the time which is long gone
tears flow from my eyes when i go back in my childhood
my childhood will never come back but
the child in me will never go

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 03 July 2009

best days of our lives... subject well defined...

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Nooruddeen Mm 01 July 2009

Dear Jahanvi Recollecting the vivid childhood is common nature for every one I think but when you think about the later stage we all want to get back the child hood. So many poets narrated so many poems very effectively about this subject. You too very effectively expressed it. Congratulation. Nooruddeen

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Ted M 01 July 2009

Childhood is the best stage of life for any human being. Fun, carefree, innocence, security and protection and lots of love from elders. As you grow up, you miss all those nice things.Well written. If I may say so, avoiding repetition of childhood could make your sweet little poem still better.

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Shekhar Joshi 02 July 2009

nice one.........childhood indeed is such a beautiful stage of life........ good powm......... ;)

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Drew Burke 17 May 2012

Exactly how I felt, I had to lose my childhood at age eight when my parents were going through divorce, and I was the weirdo or freak to the other kids, but the child in me never left, insults were just another unique complement to me

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nice poem

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Steal 21 July 2018

I'm also using it for a project

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Musibau Rukayat 04 February 2018

Thanks for the poem sir, it really motivate me, have been thinking how to say this poem to people.

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Zzzzz 29 January 2018

Its great and simple

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Zzzzz 29 January 2018

Im sorry and thank you for the writer. Can i borrow it for my english assignment Thank you so much

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