My Darkness Poem by Asha Adeana

My Darkness

Rating: 4.3


In the darkness
From the whispers of your voice
To seeing your face
My tears haven’t stopped
Just remembering what we had
The things we shard
No one can take that away
The laughter that kept going
But now my sadness
Is the thing that never stops
The only thing I want to do
Is to hold your hand again
Just one last time
So you'll just know
Just believe me
That you brighten up my life
The sun that takes away my darkness
Only you wipe up my tears
When no one else will
Just until
Our love flue out the window
Cause you my love
You’re forever gone
In the darkness
Of my blacken sadden heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Linke 21 April 2006

Great poem, especially like the way it ended. Also thought I sould mention that in the fourth line you sould have used havn't instead of hasn't and until is spelled with a 'u'.

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