My Daughter's Poem For Me Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

My Daughter's Poem For Me

Rating: 5.0


I.
Have I ever told you that your crescent smile is the full moon's other half?
- that when you open my black empty wallet, you'll see your photograph?
- that despite all that we're going through, when I'm with you I always laugh?

II.
Have I ever told you that your scent takes me back to my childhood?
- that I could be wrong all the time but you always understood?
- that despite all of the bad things, when I'm with you everything feels good?

III.
Have I ever told you that your poetry inspired mine?
- that it's because of you I wrote poems since I was nine?
that despite all the heartaches, when I'm with you the stars align?

V.
So now you know that I will love you in your lowest points and greatest heights.
- that when I was a baby it was blurry at first but it was love at first sight.
- that despite all of the adversities, when I'm with you everything feels alright

Sunday, January 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: daughter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 25 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Jesus. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Bharati Nayak 10 January 2018

Have I ever told you that your crescent smile is the full moon's other half? - that when you open my black empty wallet, you'll see your photograph? - that despite all that we're going through, when I'm with you I always laugh? A wonderful poem on father-daughter bonding.

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Jesus llorico 04 May 2018

Thank you Ms Bharati Nayak, for your wonderful comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 January 2018

Such a heartwarming write... a huge 10+++

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Jesus Llorico 04 May 2018

Thank you Mr Bernard Asuncion for your exceptional comment.

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