Jesus James Llorico

Walk With Me - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

An empty road.... this peaceful night....
As evening breeze, blend with street lights

Though far are we, from city's glow
With only dunes and sands to show

Come, be with me, my fairest one
Let us walk this road, hand in hand

Then we will talk about the time
When we were young and in our prime

The crescent moon up in the sky
Will spread radiance for you and I

Tell me then, that moment arise
First time we meet, love in our eyes!

While this divine and gentle wind
Just lightly brush your lovely skin

Whisper me then, the simple truth
We're both in love, since time of youth

Our pleasant talk, gaze from afar
Your sparkling smile mix with the stars

Together we'll laugh, so much fun
The world will know that we are one!

For you and I, this walk entails
It's just seem, like some fairy tale

Though this dream, be out of the blue
I hope someday this will come true...

Comments about Walk With Me by Jesus James Llorico

  • Gold Star - 4,941 Points Points Of View (9/15/2014 5:39:00 AM)

    Full of hopes...someday soon it will happen. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 50,545 Points Roseann Shawiak (9/4/2014 2:32:00 PM)

    Simply expressing a love you hope to have in the future is very beautiful, brought tears to my eyes because it is so endearing and tender. Fantastic poem, Jesus! ! Thank you for sharing your heart. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,673 Points Unwritten Soul (10/5/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Stuck with the feeling you left here..great best mark for u :) _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Syd Barrett (9/25/2013 3:51:00 AM)

    Beautiful. bellissimo! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leonard Langberg (9/24/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    Cool and interesting poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tim Shivers (9/22/2013 2:13:00 AM)

    Inspiring beautiful artistic poem of joy and peace- -much enjoyment! .... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Helen Remegio (9/20/2013 11:16:00 PM)

    Great! it's a very beautiful poem...i love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philip Andermann (9/20/2013 10:59:00 PM)

    The beauty of this divine and gentle poem truly brought tears down my cheeks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Sj Holland (8/18/2013 4:59:00 AM)

    This is my favorite stanza:

    ...Tell me then, that moment arise
    First time we meet, love in our eyes! ...

    The last stanza was a surprise. I thought all along that it was real, until the end. I hope it did come true for you though, and believe it did. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (6/12/2013 4:56:00 PM)

    so beautiful, so tender, so romantics fused with good rhythm and flow make this poem show a honest and intense emotions (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,003 Points Hazel Durham (6/7/2013 3:25:00 PM)

    So beautiful with such delicate and graceful rhythm and flow a gentle, dreamlike write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (6/6/2013 10:15:00 AM)

    a lovely write about youth and life. Something to talk about in later years. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 150 Points Zubiya Surti (5/28/2013 10:16:00 AM)

    a very lovely poem, sir.thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 5, 2013

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