I dreamt that she sat by my head, tenderly ruffling my hair with
her fingers, playing the melody of her touch. I looked at her face
and struggled with my tears, till the agony of unspoken words burst
my sleep like a bubble.
I sat up and saw the glow of the Milky Way above my window,
like a world of silence on fire, and I wondered if at this moment
she had a dream that rhymed with mine.
Wow i just love it brother, keep up
Good poem about love, and been as one with Your partner. Great write.
Soft and smoothly deepen to readers heart..Gooood poem and it a candy lullaby under milky way...Good and nice write, like star and moon shine.._Unwritten Soul
What i term as the two SS, simple & straight..., nice...keep it up!
that was so good i wish i wrote that good amazing pure genius :)
The poem takes the reader flying, flying in the land of dreams and magic. I loved to read it. Very nice poem.
A rhyming dream determing rhyming feelings; a great love poem!
From : Louis Borgo (shelby United States; Male; 23) To : Vivek Haldar Date Time : 10/19/2011 5: 26: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : my dream i love your detail imagine of the one you love. i like the line like a world of silence on fire, great used of word. keep written i comment here because im not on facebook
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I would like to translate this poem
Wow! Brother Short but very enough to put a smile on her a face, its a nice love poem wonderfully written, welldone, read mine, 'The Traveller'